At the moment I´m pretty happy how this came out. It was the first time I used my Brush Pen, even though I bought it like one month ago, and drawing with it is pretty fun I like how the width of the lines can be varied so much.
I´m planning to do at least one painting similar to this one and I hope to make it in the next few days. Furthermore I´ve got another painting where I only need to do the final retouch, so I will probably submit it later this day .
Comments and any kind of feedback is highly apprechiated, thank you very much in advance!
If you like, take a look at the other works of this series:
You did well with the atmosphere on this. The strange shading on the girl combined with the brush pen's lines creates a sort of awkward look. Especially on her skirt/shorts. More practice on craftmanship would really help fix this I think.
oO I´m not sure if I understand what you mean about the "strange shading" and "awkward look"... and I don´t really see how craftsmanship can help this?